My kids do not enjoy writing, to put it mildly, but I thought this little story was pretty funny. Hope you like it, too! I left the formatting and punctuation errors in, but he will be doing some editing tomorrow. The assignment was to write a story from the perspective of any other person or animal.
Operation Bird bomb by Eli Adams
I’m a pigeon who likes to crap on peoples cars. People don’t really appreciate us pigeons, I don’t get
It, I mean do they even know how hard it is to aim your poop while flying? Like one day I was
Swooping down low for a bombing run on this one car when a kid started shooting at me with his bb gun
I mean like come on! When I came around for the second run I dove straight at him and he
Got scared and started running so I decided to bomb him instead of the car, after I crapped on
His jacket I ended up going back for the car too but it was gone so I did my usual rounds in
The neighborhood pooping on all my favorite cars and bench’s and sidewalks when suddenly
I spotted the car that was missing, so I headed straight for it, when I saw a few other
Birds heading for it too, it was now a race to see who could poop on the car first.
I was in the lead when one of them passed me, then I knew I had failed so I went back
That is hilarious! Well done!
As the kids would say, “LOL.” I can’t believe he didn’t enjoy writing that.
I think once he got going, he did! 🙂
Isn’t that the way it goes? Sometimes it’s just a matter of getting started. I hope he continues.
Solid humor, unlike pigeon crap